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What does he want?

I’ve started my next MS. Actually, I’m working on two of them at once–a first for me. Not sure it’s a good idea, but we’ll see what happens. My contemporary is coming along nicely. I have GMC pretty well in hand, and I’ve written the first few scenes.

Blind Fury on the other hand, is giving me fits. I’m trying to work through the GMC for the characters before I go any further with the project (hence, the stagnating word count). I think I have the heroine fairly well pegged, but the hero is not cooperating. His internal goal is good, but externally, he has no idea what he wants.

He’s not after excessive wealth, he likes his job, he has good friends, he likes to play the field (for now ;-)). Sure, he might like a newer car, or to win a race, or to date the prettiest woman on the block, but those aren’t story-worthy goals.

Clearly, I need to re-evaluate his cushy lifestyle. He needs some past traumas to give him reasons for wanting…something. Not only that but what he wants should conflict with the heroine’s goals.

(Yes, I’ve been skimming Deb Dixon’s Goal, Motivation, & Conflict again. Great book.)

Okay, so maybe I have an idea after all. This is like when your kids come to you for help with a problem, and by the time they explain it to you, they’ve figured it out without your help at all.

Wow, you guys are the best! ūüôā