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Fire the gun

If you say in the first chapter that there is a rifle hanging on the wall, in the second or third chapter it absolutely must go off. If it’s not going to be fired, it shouldn’t be hanging there. -Anton Chekhov

I’m not completely sure I agree with Mr. Chekhov. After all, maybe the gun shows something else. The guy likes antique weapons? He’s a hunter?

On the other hand, the rifle must have relevance to something. If the character is a collector or hunter, that should come into play, even if the gun on the mantle doesn’t.

I recently read a story where the author made a point of noting a character’s fear of fire. So, of course, I expected that to come back later. Surely he would have to face fire or flame later in the story in order to defeat the villain or rescue the heroine.

Wrong!

Maybe the author was just trying to build a sympathetic, human character. Nothing wrong with that. But in this case, it was enough outside the realm of the rest of the story that it stood out. And it stood out even more for never being mentioned again.

Who knows. Perhaps she originally had a purpose for the fear and then later changed the plot line. I’m sure I’ve done worse.

Either way, the experience got me thinking about how we create our settings and humanize our characters. Our goal is to populate the book with realistic, interesting settings, and humanize the characters with traits that give them a three-dimensional feel. But we have to be careful not to put in unnecessary objects or characteristics that confuse the reader.

If the heroine is afraid of heights, she’d better be forced to scale a ladder or fly in an airplane at some point. If someone drops a banana peel, another character better slip on it. Either that, or the banana should be a red herring. Somehow it has to matter. (Maybe the guy’s an unrepentant litterer.)

Have you run across any “guns over the fireplace” that were never fired?

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In memory of Dick Francis, 31 October 1920 – 14 February 2010.

“Some are born weird, some achieve it, others have weirdness thrust upon them.” ~Dick Francis (To the Hilt)

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  1. Martha W

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    I love both of those quotes. And sad to see Dick Francis passed away. 🙁

    I don’t notice so much if something doesn’t come into play as much as I notice if the gun gets fired without having seen the gun. I hate that. When something big happens and I can’t figure out where it came from- Ugh. I’ll spend a good amount of time trying to figure out what I missed. And I hate that too.

  2. Christine

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    My current WIP has a heroine who is terrified of the dark. You can bet this will be in the final scenes… major!

    I used fire in this book, and I am wondering how to tie it into my hero’s background. I know he’s afraid of needles and his mom is a retired nurse… I think Freud could have fun with that one.

    You’ve just reminded me to layer in another encounter with an needle for my hero 🙂

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    Gwen, such an interesting point. I am one of those (apparently few!) writers who enjoyed the Twilight books. I kept expecting Bella’s ability to smell blood and her distaste for it in the first book to come into play as more than an interesting contrast to the vampires. It never did.
    But you do have me thinking again about a gun I mention in my MS…. Thanks!

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      Yeah, it would bug me that such a strong (and relevant) trait didn’t have a greater purpose.

      Always glad to provoke thought. 😉 Good luck with the writing!

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